By Virginia Euwer Wolff. Henry Holt and Company. 1993. 200p.
Written in verse, the chapters of this spare and unassumingly honest story are numbered like sonnets and divided into parts, each marked by a baby’s dirty hand print. These dirty hand prints represent more than just LaVaughn’s babysitting job for a single mother with two children, they also are a subtle clue to the underlying humanity of the story. LaVaughn learns early on from her mother that she’s going to get out of the neighborhood that requires her mother to head the WATCH committee and that made her father the victim of a drive by shooting by going to COLLEGE. She knows that she needs to keep up with her schoolwork but she also needs a way to make a little extra money. She finds Jolly’s ad in the school office and soon falls into a routine of watching her two children, Jilly and Jeremy despite the squalor she finds them in.
Jolly is seventeen, working a factory job with no high school diploma and barely keeping a roof over the heads of her two children. When she gets fired from her job for ratting on her boss (Mr. Fingers as LaVaughn calls him) after he molests her in a closet, she can’t afford to pay LaVaughn to sit for her anymore. LaVaughn has developed a relationship with Jeremy especially, potty training him, helping him plant Lemon seeds and to shop for new shoes. LaVaughn’s mother is not interested in hearing Jolly’s troubles, only that she seems to be taking advantage of LaVaughn’s kindness. LaVaughn comes up with a plan to get Jolly in to the Moms Up program at her school where they help teenage mothers get their education so that they can get better jobs. Jolly is resistant at first because she is opposed to anything that sounds like Welfare, afraid that the state will take away her children. She eventually agrees and the program agrees to pay LaVaughn for one hour a day to help give Jolly time to do her school work.
Through the course of their relationship LaVaughn and Jolly learn things about each other amidst the dried food on the floor, the worry over the diapers running out and the constant parade of cockroaches. Jolly used to have a Gram, as she called her who took care of her and other foster children, but when she died, she moved to the street and lived in a cardboard box. There she used drugs that got her pregnant as she explains because it let guys do whatever they wanted. LaVaughn tells Jolly about how her father managed to stay out of gangs his whole life only to be shot in a drive by in his own neighborhood. Every time Jolly encounters an obstacle like having missed too many of her classes when Jeremy has the chicken pox she laments, “Well, nobody told me.” She tells LaVaughn a story about how a group of boys tricked an blind mother after she drops an orange for her children by giving her a lemon. She feels bad that she allowed herself to be tricked, but eventually makes lemonade, giving Jolly hope about her lot in life and also the book its title.
Soon however, LaVaughn can’t quite describe how proud it makes her feel to see Jolly with her binder, doing her homework and taking swimming CPR classes with her baby Jilly. She gets the feeling that even though someone on the outside wouldn’t think things looked any different, she can tell that beyond the grit on the floor or the dishes in the sink, there is some hope for Jolly. One ordinary day, the baby, Jilly has been into everything, turning the stove on and making a mess. Then Jolly turns around to find her choking on a toy spider. Having learned CPR in her Moms Up class, she knows just what to do and begins frantically trying to help her baby. She screams at LaVaughn to dial 911, and Jeremy himself presses the nine, having learned his numbers from LaVaughn. LaVaughn is so proud of how Jolly didn’t give up on Jilly and ended up saving her life right there on that dirty apartment floor. While they ride to the hospital, LaVaughn takes Jeremy to her house and her own mother tells him what a hero he is for helping to save his little sister. Jolly keeps with her classes and soon doesn’t need LaVaughn to sit for her, but LaVaughn remembers her mother praising Jeremy and that his little lemon plant has started to grow.
This book is a gritty but gorgeous example of how not to loose a story in the words. Wolff’s economy with words allows the veracity of Jolly’s situation to shine through and allows the reader to fully appreciate the lengths of LaVaughn’s kindness. She uses simple words to tell a simple story about simple people, but her message is anything but simple. She shows how hard it is sometimes to do the right thing without any hope of personal gain, but how an ordinary person can make an extraordinary difference in the life of anther. Teens will instantly appreciate the author’s brevity and realism. Appropriate for Junior through Senior High students, I would rate this novel in verse a 5Q and a 4P. The format may be a hurdle for some, but a few pages into the book, a teen will find him/herself having forgotten that it looks more like a poem than a novel. LaVaughn and Jolly’s story is one that will remain, like a tiny hand print, pressed on the heart of all who read it.